doot88：

　　我的作文

　　Dear mr kofi annan:

　　 I am a sophomore in the Biology Department of china. I am writing to you about some opinon in the world peace.

　　 Recent years,some countrys are involed in war. More and more people have no food and houses. When we see a 13-year- old girl who lost her leg,because of the afraid war.We are appealing " we must stop war".

　　 Unition country agency is a very important in the world peace. It can promots the world peace process . I sincerely hope that the union country agency will try the best on the world peace.All of us will appreaciate it.Thank you.

　　 yours sincerely

　　anna

　　错误：您的作文90%以上句子都有错误，考试时为不及格档次的作文。请加油！

　　1. I am a sophomore in the Biology Department of china / I am a Chinese college student majoring in Biology.

　　2. I am writing to you about some opinon in the world peace. / I am writing to you to express some opinions about the world peace.

　　3.Recent years,some countrys are involed in war / In recent years, some countries are involved in wars.

　　4.When we see a 13-year- old girl who lost her leg,because of the afraid war.We are appealing " we must stop war" / When we see a 13-year- old girl who lost her leg because of the horrifying war, we are appealing " we must stop war"

　　5.Unition country agency is a very important in the world peace / The UN is a very important organization in promoting world peace.

　　6.promots / promote

　　7.All of us will appreaciate it / … appreciate

　　AirYang：

　　Respectable, Mr. general secretary

　　 It is a pleasure to write to you to express my opinion of world peace. I am a student from China. My schoolmates and I love peace and wish the status could be kept for long. Due to the grinding of continuous war in the past, we Chinese people cherish peace, and realize how precious such situation is. We appreciate the effort of world peace that the United Nations has contributed since it established.

　　 Yet there still are some things threatening the valuable peace. Recently, several nations are taking their nuclear programs. Although they claimed the use was just for peace, it was a very dangerous trend. Another threat is the terrorism. Such organizations greatly shocked the world in the latest decade. Terrorist groups and militants have made many attacks to civilian targets. They attempt to reach their evil, political purpose in this way. It is the greatest pain for the world.

　　 Fortunately, most countries have smelled the problems, and the UN has operated effective measures against these barriers in the way to world peace. But to reach real peace, we still have a long road to go. No matter Chinese or the people living in other countries would not like to experience the bitter of war that we had suffered before. So we have reasons(这里的reason可以用 some代替吗？) to join our hands in protecting our home from any hurt imaginable. We expect the UN could have effect more greatly in the future. We expect to see a comfortable and steady climate.

　　 Yours Sincerely,

　　 AirYang

　　错误：

　　1.We appreciate the effort of world peace that the United Nations has contributed / We appreciate the contribution to the world peace that the UN has made..

　　2.Although they claimed the use was just for peace, / … its use

　　rilxk：

　　 I am a college student of People’s Republic of China. I’m very apologetic to occupy your limited leisure time for reading my letter, but I remain to hope you know about the idea of the peace of world in the eye of the average man.

　　 Nowadays, it is beyond doubt that peace and development are the major subject. However, there are some developed nations break the rule and launch a war against the third-world countries regardless of the Unite Nation’s persuasion. Every one hold the idea that one country has no rights to interfere in other nation’s domestic affairs and has no qualification to take up others’ resources.

　　 In my belief, UN should play a leading role in worldwide businesses and enforce the sever punishment of the aggressive nations . I sincerely hope that UN, under your presidency, can ease the conflicts in every corner of the world and act as the world cop to bring the authentic peace.

　　 Respectfully yours

　　 Rilxk

　　错误：

　　1.I remain to hope / I still hope…

　　2.in the eye of the average man. / … an average man

　　3.there are some developed nations break the rule a /… which break….

　　4.interfere in other nation’s domestic affairs / intervene in ….

　　给你的朋友写信，阐述你对他的忧虑的看法与建议。你的朋友

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　　范文：

　　Dear Xiaotong,

　　Glad to receive your mail but sorry to hear that you failed in exams of some compulsory courses. You mentioned in your letter that “I have been losing sleep over this and this is a major setback in my college days”.

　　In my view, it serves you right. After all, as a student, studying should be on top of your agenda. Although you have made a fortune and lighten your parents’ load through doing part-jobs, you missed the golden opportunity of learning. I would like to make some suggestions for you. You should strike / achieve / keep a balance between studying and extracurricular activities. So now you should drop some of the jobs you are taking and give top priority to your main task. Keep in mind that over time your priority will change. After stepping out of the Ivory Tower, you could moonlightat will.

Defer:

　　Dear xiao ming:

　　It is not inevitable to meet this state. I believe that you can cope with them successfully. You take a part-time job this term, although, and you spend an army of leisure time on it . It is not incorrect . With this work , you can get advancement on ability . It is the wealth for you .From your words, I hold the fact that , you failed to the qualify in some subjects . Therefore, you have the feeling that you are in hot water . In some part , it is unessential and wisdom for you to change the situation .You have a talent for learning , I harbor the view that . Due to the limited spare time , you may pay a close attention in class . If you master the knowledge fast during the class ,you don’t need much more hours to review the texts . You will be over that you can not get through the tests . There have positive effects ,because of this consequence it makes an timely alarm to you , and you will never face the same phenomenon . In a word , you can solute the matter in the best way .

　　错误：

　　1.It is not inevitable to meet this state. / It is not inevitable to meet this kind of state.

　　2.you failed to the qualify in some subjects / you failed in some subjects

　　3.You have a talent for learning , I harbor the view that / You have a talent for learning , I harbor the view .

　　4.If you master the knowledge fast during the class / If you master the knowledge fast in class.

　　5. you can solute the matter in the best way ./ you can solve the matter in the best way .

　　echo811018:

　　Dear Xiaolan,

　　How have you been in the past couple of days? I have received your mail for two days. I’m so sorry to hear that you are failed the exams, especially, most of them are compulsory courses.

　　As a college student, acquiring knowledge is still on the top of our agenda. Obviously, you have committed a blunder. Naturally, doing part-time jobs may be good for you to hunt a nice job, but it has brought you a negative effect. It’s a hot potato, although, I am trying to make some approaches for you.

　　For a start, please don’t worry too much. It is no use crying over spilt milk. Secondly, it is advisable that you stop doing the part-time jobs and study hard again. The point is, it is urgent for us to review and pass the second test of those lessons. Last but not least, we will at the dawn of this new school term, you can catch up with the other fellow students if you hold the chance.

　　Well, I have to attend my class. Next time, I’ll visit you and we can have a nice chat. Take care and see you soon.

　　Best wishes

　　 Yours sincerely

　　Zhang Ying

　　错误：写的很棒！

　　1.It’s a hot potato, although, I am trying to make some approaches for you. / Although it’s a hot potato, I am trying to make some approaches for you.

　　2.you are failed the exams / you failed in some exams

　　3.we will at the dawn of this new school term, / we will be at the dawn of this new school term,

　　豌豆:

　　Dear Xiao Wang:

　　 I am glad to hear from you. I feel upset for your experience these days. I pray everything is going well from now.

　　 You tell of your anxiety over the study on your letter, since it is severe influenced by the long-time part time job, and ask for some suggestions. I really know that it is because your family finance, you have to take so many part time jobs over the past three years. Concerning to the situation, however, I do believe it is advisable to transfer your attention from the jobs to your lectures. We are senior students; it is the last year for us to strive for our future. Only we have the excellent achievement, will we have the capital to step into the society, and we will not have the pity when leaving the Ivory Tower.

　　 I

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　　Good Luck

　　 Yours Ge

　　错误：

　　1.You tell of your anxiety over the study on your letter / You tell of your anxiety over the study in your letter

　　2.Concerning to the situation, however, / Concerning the situation, however,

　　3.for he or she have /… has

　　4.to study hard from now. / to study hard from now on

　　全国四六级考试作文得分平均最高的三个地区是上海、江苏、浙江，其它地区一般都要低于这个水平，这次在浙江杭州批的是江苏、江西、广东、福建的卷子，江苏南京地区主要是负责上海，山东和海南三省市的卷子。 总体看来，四级作文除海南之外大都在8分左右，即第三个档次的文章偏多。具体作文评分原则还是02年制定的那个，大家可以找找点点论坛以前的帖子。

　　江苏南京(代表江苏最高水平)四级作文5-6分的相当多， 平均分不到7分，12分以上相当少，考生的主要问题还是各种错误多，语言模板化，缺少亮点。估计有40%以上的考生作文6分以下，也就是说要倒扣分。其它省平均分更低，低大致1-2分。但一个地区平均水平不行，并不一定意味着你作为个体，得分不高。比如说在南京批的海南的卷子，尽管大部分都是一两分，但也有10分以上的。山东的作文也顺便提一下，基本上每次山东的作文大部分人内容都写很多，超过字数要求，这次也是。一般老师看你写这么多，是不好意思给你太低的分数的，这一点请大家体会。

　　六级作文平均分比四级要更低一些，一般有50-60%的人低于6分。

　　四六级作文如果缺少提示中的要点，一般少一点在你的得分档次上扣一分，但一般不超过3分，另外，六级作文如果没写成书信格式，没什么影响。

　　在阅卷过程中，模板作文继续受到阅卷的老师批判，大家一定要注意！

　　阅卷老师主要掌握这些原则，发现闪光点而不是找错误，(参见作文闪光点一帖)有语言错误但是不影响意思表达时可以理解(但必须是在用英语思维的前提下，而不是老师利用汉语的思维回译的内容)，不能只注重语言和单词，要更多注意语句表达出来没有，大家可以好好看看11分档次和8分档次的样卷，可能大家会觉得8分的样卷中有很多大家常用的词组，或者出现高级词汇的频率要多些，但是在阅卷中最主要看的是思想的表达，文字的连贯，把该说的说出来，不拖泥带水才是最主要的。下面是5篇样卷，大家可以参照着给自己的作文估算个分数。

14 points

　　Dear fellow students,

　　I am grateful that you offer me the chance to speak here. I am impressed by the speeches of the previous candidates. Yet, I want to prove myself better for the post of chairman.

　　First of all, I have a pleasant personality. Last year I was the dorm director of our building and I managed to get along with all the students well. I have acquired working experience and communication skills which I consider as the most essential for the coordinator of the whole student union.

　　Secondly, I’m always ready to create. At present our union is very well organized. However our activity schedule is slightly motonous. I am willing to add some vivid elements into it in order to make our campus life more enjoyable.

　　If I am elected the chairman, I promise I will become your voice and build the student union into a bridge between the students and the university.

　　I’m your best choice, vote for me, vote for yourself, thank you!

　　干净，整洁，漂漂亮亮

　　11 points

　　Hello, everyone. I believe I am the best choice of the post of chairman of the student union.

　　First, I have the ability which is nessary to the post of chairman of the student union. I have been monitor of our class since I came to this school. In the past years, I worked very well on the post. Second, I have many interests. For example, I play basketball and foot ball very well. My tennis is good, too. Third, I have a lot of friends. Almost everyone likes me.

　　If I were chosen to be the chairman of the student union, I will work for the need of the students. I will tell the school what we students really need and what we don’t want.

　　I believe, I am the best choice for the post of chairman of student union. Thank you!

　　清清楚楚，该说的都说了，语法上没有什么大问题，篇章连贯，但感觉略缺火候。

　　8 points

　　Ladies and Gentlemen, all the schoolmates and teachers:

　　I will elect to the post of chairman of the students union. The reasons I make this decision is that I’m desire to do more things for you. Apparently, only wishes are not available. I’ll make you believe that not only did I have wishes but also capacity.

　　First, when I was a freshman, I took part in many kinds of activities to accumulate experiences and now I familiar with the process that how the students union works. Second, I love making friends and I had extensively hobbies. These can make me orgernize people easily. The tird, I take this work very seriously and I’ll try my best to improve and develop the students union to make you satisfired.

　　In a word, I’m the right person you have ever been searching. So, support me! I’ll never make you disappointed.

　　马马虎虎，想表达某意思，但是有中国式的思维句，有明显汉语的影子。

　　5 points

　　Thanks everybodies to give me a chance to electe the post of chairman of the student union. I’ll do my best in that post.

　　I will inform myself first. I am a man of hard-working. So I will do anything with my best. I can help e

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　　If I get the post, I’ll solve the problems of every students. First thing I think must solve is the price in the school. It is too expensive to our student. Second, I think we must have more free time. Nowaday, too many course in our table. So we cannot do something which we want to do. I think it is bad. Last, I wll orginaze more preformances in school, in order to fill the rest time.

　　I hope everyone give me a chance to acheve my hopes. Thanks!

　　糊里糊涂

　　2 points

　　Nowadays in our highly technological society, it’s wildly belived that the person’s ability is very crucial in our daily life.

　　As for as I can do chairman of Student commitment for best. First at all I have good communication skill for any people. Secondly I have goodly boby to competent this assign, because I very like sport and every morning do body excises, mealwhile, I’m a great student to lead us student for study together, and of course. Last but not least. If I election successful, I will do my young age, do anything for every classmate rejoice in hoe and patient in tribulation.

　　All of this reason to lead every people to conclution that I can election.

　　Very hope all classmate support me. Thank you!

　　一塌糊涂

　　创造闪光点，决胜四六级

　　战鼓已经敲响了，各位奋斗在抗击CET最前线的点点英语的朋友们，你们辛苦啦，希望下面的内容能够帮上大家哦！

　　作文是各类英语考试中得分率最低的题型之一。同学们在掌握了一定的作文模板，和基本的语法、词汇、句型用法之后，如果能在作文中创造一些词汇和句型的闪光点，必定会使你的作文如虎添翼！

　　高分作文标志

　　1：是否长短句交叉；

　　2、是否会使用插入语；

　　3、用词是否多样，准确，形象，尽量使用能够吸引阅卷老师眼球的闪光词；

　　4、关键词是否换用，切勿老用重复词；

　　5、句型使用是否准确、地道。

　　下面给出写好一篇作文的注意事项：

　　1.适当用被动替换主动，这样能更客观的反映事实, 句子开头不要总是用we / I (比如写结尾时不用we should pay attention to而用Attention should be paid to. ) 举个经典结尾2004年六月六级作文的最后一段：It is ,therefore, high time that some applicable approaches were implemented by the service industry like that. By doing so，its competitive edge will be sharpened effectively.

　　2.善于使用插入语，比如说把副词、连接词等，作插入语放在中间，一般放在主语、动词或者助动词后，两边分别加上逗号。

　　如however / therefore /for example/I believe 做插入语放在中间，一般放在动词，助动词后，两边分别加上逗号。

　　比如说： Other individuals, however, take the attitude that …

　　3. 一定要学会换词，换形象，具体的替换太宽泛的。(考试中一般不要出现good, bad , many, thing, think,

　　people, opinion 等等)比如上面例子中，applicable替换proper, approaches替换ways, implement替换carry out, sharpen one’s competitive edge替换enhance one’s competitiveness(提高某物竞争力)

　　下面举一篇南京工程学院某位同学写的优秀作文(14分)的例子，看看他是如何运用各类写作技巧的。这位同学把老师上课讲的各类写作手法和精彩替换和句型都用上了，作文有了很大的提高。

　　Computer and I By Simmy

　　I never forget the exceedingly thrilling day when my mother bought me a computer as birthday present, which exerted a tremendous fascination on me so that i indulged myself in googling an army of useful information i had expected ,and enjoy a sea of melodious classic music. That night I was sleepless, feeling that the whole world belonged to me.

　　exceedingly 替换 very

　　thrilling 替换 exciting

　　sth. exert a tremendous fascination on sb 替换 sb. be interested in sth.

　　google 替换 search

　　an army of 替换 a lot of

　　The dawn of the new century witnessed the increasing popularity of computers. Coincident with the advancement of science and technology, computers pouring into the current society as a fashion are appealing to growing individuals. It is no exaggeration to say we have been submerged by them, in large measure!

　　The dawn of the new century witnessed 是一个精彩句型，用来描述在某个时期发生了什么事情；

　　Increasing popularity 替换 more and more popular

　　Coincident with … 非常地道的句型，表达“与…一致”的意思，替换 With …

　　Advancement 替换 development

　　Pour into ( flood into / swarm into )替换 enter into

　　Current ( currently )替换 now

　　Appeal to sb. 替换 sb. be interested in sth.

　　Growing individuals 替换 more and more people

　　It is no exaggeration to say 经典句型， 说某事是毫不夸张的

　　For a start, we can, freely, search desired information at any moment . Little by little, our knowledge will be well enriched, and our horizons will be greatly broadened. Additionally, we can get huge recreations online by chatting, playing games, or delivering email.

　　For a start 替换 To begin with

　　We can, freely, search 用了插入语的写作手法

　　our knowledge will be well enriched, and our horizons will be greatly broadened. 用了非常精彩的被动

　　Additionally 替换 In add

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　　Deliver 替换 send

　　There is no denying that , however, computers can function in the disservice of human beings, in a way, especially the growing violence ,***, porn pictures, AV-films emerging on the screen , which leads quiet a few net citizens to copying.

　　There is no denying that , however, computers can function in the disservice of human beings, 这个句子有三个精彩之处，首先There is no denying that这个句型，还有however作为插入语， function in the disservice of 替换 do harm to

　　Emerging 替换 appearing ( fading 替换 disappearing )

　　Net citizen 网民，属于精彩用词

　　As a classic proverb goes that no garden has no weeds. Computers do play a positive role in the development of people' lives, despite a slice of unfavorable impacts. We should ,therefore, take advantage of the fruits and avoid the opposite facet.

　　No garden has no weeds 替换 Every coin has two sides

　　Computers do play ，do 强调

　　Positive 替换 important / good 等

　　A slice of 替换 a part of

　　Unfavorable 替换 bad

　　Impacts 替换 effects / influences

　　We should, therefore, take advantage of … 使用插入语

　　Fruits (而且fruits 用的非常形象， merits/ virtues) 替换 advantage ( defects 替换 disadvantage )

　　Facet 替换 aspect

　　各位同学，上面的作文里有这么多精彩的闪光点，作文怎么会不得高分呢！

　　以下是30个最经典的替换词，各位同学可以参考一下。

　　1.individuals,characters, folks替换(people ,persons)

　　2: positive, favorable, rosy (美好的)，promising

　　(有希望的)，perfect, pleasurable , excellent, outstanding, superior替换good

　　3:dreadful, unfavorable, poor, adverse, ill (有害的)替换bad

　　如果bad做表语，可以有be less impressive替换

　　eg.An army of college students indulge themselves in playing games, enjoying romance with girls/boys or killing time passively in their dorms. When it approaches to graduation ,as a result, they find their academic records are less impressive.

　　4.(an army of, an ocean of, a sea of, a multitude of ,a host of, many, if not most)替换many.

　　注：用many, if not most 一定要小心，many后一定要有词。

　　Eg. Many individuals, if not most, harbor the idea that….同理 用most, if not all ,替换most.

　　5: a slice of, quiet a few , several替换some

　　6:harbor the idea that, take the attitude that,

　　hold the view that, it is widely shared that,

　　it is universally acknowledged that)替think

　　(因为是书面语，所以要加that)

　　7:affair ,business ,matter 替换thing

　　8: shared 代 common

　　9.reap huge fruits 替换get many benefits )

　　10:for my part ,from my own perspective 替换 in my opinion

　　11:Increasing(ly),growing 替换more and more( 注意没有growingly这种形式。所以当修饰名词时用increasing/growing.修饰形容词，副词用increasingly.

　　Eg.sth has gained growing popularity.

　　Sth is increasingly popular with the advancement of sth.

　　12.little if anything, 或little or nothing替换hardly

　　13..beneficial, rewarding替换helpful,

　　14.shopper,client,consumer,purchaser, 替换customer

　　15.exceedingly,extremely, intensely 替换very

　　16.hardly necessary, hardly inevitable ... 替换 unnecessary, avoidable

　　17.sth appeals to sb, sth exerts a tremendous fascination on sb 替换sb take interest in / sb. be interested in

　　18.capture one's attention替换attract one's attention.

　　19.facet,demension,sphere代aspect

　　20.be indicative of ,be suggestive of ,be fearful of代 indicate, suggest ,fear

　　21.give rise to, lead to, result in, trigger 替换cause.

　　22. There are several reasons behind sth 替换..reasons for sth

　　23.desire 替换want.

　　24.pour attention into 替换pay attention to

　　25.bear in mind that 替换remember

　　26. enjoy, possess 替换have(注意process是过程的意思)

　　27. interaction替换communication

　　28.frown on sth替换 be against , disagree with sth

　　29.to name only a few, as an example替换 for example, for instance

　　30. next to / virtually impossible,替换nearly / almost impossible

　　希望各位朋友能够在平时的学习中多总结精彩、地道的词汇和句型闪光点，并与大家共享！

　作文经典句型总结

　　一至七条为图表句型.

　　一. 上升增长

　　1.…add up to… 增加了

　　eg. The total amount of … added up to 14 billion pounds(14%) in 1994.

　　2. to jump to / to soar to.. 一跃达到/ 猛增到…

　　eg. The total working days lost soared to 10 million in 1979.

　　3.…an increase of about…percent as compared with.. 与…相比大约增加了…

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　　4.…to experience an increase/incline …有了增长

　　eg. Tobacco consumption is experiencing an incline.

　　二. 下降，减少

　　1.…to sink/drop/reduce to… 减少到…

　　eg. The rate of strikes sank/dropped to the lowest point in 1979.

　　2.…to experience a decrease/decline …有了减少

　　eg. Tobacco consumption is experiencing a decrease. 注意：

　　修饰上升/减少的副词有：

　　rapidly slowly dramatically respectively 表达上升/减少的最后状态的词有：

　　the highest peak the lowest point 10 million 10%

　三. 起伏

　　1.…to go up and down …起伏不定

　　eg. The strike rate went up and down during the period from 1952 to 1967.

　　2.There be ups and downs …有起有伏

　　eg. Between 1972 and 1979, there were several ups and downs in (某方面).

　　四. 稳定

　　1.…to remain steady/level/unchanged …保持稳定，几乎不变

　　eg. The rate of …remained steady (fairly level/almost unchanged) during the four years from 1963 to 1967.

　　2.…to level off (vi.)

　　eg. After a steady decline for a whole decade, the …rate shows signs of leveling off.

　　注意：

　　修饰起伏或稳定状态的副词有：

　　almost fairly 可以用于表达起伏，稳定状态的句子中的词组或句型：

　　the general situation was not worsening

　　show indications of improvement

　　it can be predicted that…

　　eg. The rate of …remained steady during the four years from 1963 to 1967,and it can be predicted that the general situation was not worsening.

　　eg. The rate of …remained steady during the four years from 1963 to 1967,showing signs of improvement in …

　　五. 成正比，反比

　　1.…be in direct /inverse ratio to/with 与…成正比/反比

　　eg. Male illustrations are in direct ratio to /with the advancement of grades, while female illustrations are in inverse ratio.

　　六. 占百分之几，几分之几

　　1….to form/comprise/make up/constitute ….percent …占百分之…

　　eg. Women comprise more than 50% of the US.population.

　　eg. Females make up only 24% of the illustrations whereas males constitute 76%.

　　2.…to form/comprise/constitute a half/third/fourth of……占…的1/2,1/3,1/4

　　eg. Female illustrions form less than a fourth of the total.

　　3.…account for…percent 占百分之几

　　eg. ……, accounting for approximately 20 percent of…

　　七. 倍数

　　1.A be …times as much/many as B

　　eg. The annual rainfall of Hunan is 5 times as much as that of Sichuan.

　　2.A doubles/is half/triples B A是B的两倍，一半，三倍

　　eg. The annual rainfall of Jidda doubles that of Janta, but is only half the amount of rain Kuwait receives each year.

　　附一 圆盘比例型图表 例： 一个圆盘显示了大学生在food, books, transportations, entertainment, clothes, unknown中的开销，它们各自占的比例依次是60%,3%,5%,10%,10%,12%，要求你描叙这个圆盘图。 描述:

　　The above pie chart consists of 6 segments, the largest one representing food, which accounts for 60% of the total. Clothes and entertainment each takes up 10%. 5% goes to transportation and 3% books. All the rest expenses, 12% of all ,is spend on unknown items.

　　总结写作模式：

　　…pie chart consists of…segments, the largest one representing…,which accounts for …of the total.…each takes up….…goes to….All the rest…, …of all,……. .

　　八.原因结果

　　1….(结果)…, owing to (原因) [owing to 为分词结构]

　　2….(结果)…, attributable to(原因) [attributable to为形容词短语]

　　3….(结果) lie in the fact that(原因) [ 同位语从句 ]

　　4….(结果)result from(原因) [句型一般]

　　5. It is precisely because (原因)…that (导致结果)… [强调结构]

　　6. …, as a result, …(导致结果)… [as a result做插入语]

　　7. (原因)be responsible for(结果) [常见句型]

　　8. (原因)，which in turn(结果)

　　eg. They give rise to unfair competition, which in turn throws original businesses into a commercial panic.

　　九.采取措施，提出建议

　　1. My suggestion to deal with/solve/relieve the problem are as follows. In the first place,…. Secondly,…. Finally,… [常见句型]

　　2. If we let the situation go as it is, …. By that time, …. 如果让这种情况继续发展下去，那么……。到那个时候，……。[比较好的句型]

　　3. More and more people are realizing the importance of…[进行时态， more and more比many好]

　　4. Great efforts/More measures/Due attention must be taken/paid to do …[ 被动语态，due attention 和be paid to 搭配]

　　5. If……, will there be anything that can make me even happier? 如果(我们怎么怎么做)，那将没有比这令我更高兴的了。[条件句，反问句]

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　　6. It is important/necessary/urgent/desirable(希望)/advisable(明智) for sb. to do sth. [It is …for …to do…句型]

　　7. enhance the awareness of people that…

　　8. The first nut for us to crack is… 我们首先要解决的是……。 [比The first thing we should do is … 句型 高级的多，精彩的多，生动的多]

　　9. ……as soon as possible [常见句型]

　　10. sth. be of the utmost importance [ be of n. 结构， 比sth. be much important好]

　　十.方式，比较

　　1. (Just) as …, so… 正如… [ 比较句型 ]

　　eg. Just as water is the most important of liquids, so air is the most important of gases.

　　2. in much the same way/manner that… 正如…, 和…一样

　　eg. The Americans spend Christmas Day in much the same way that the Europeans do.

　　十一. 让步

　　1. now that …… 既然…… [让步从句]

　　eg. Now that the decision has been made, we must try our best to carry it out.

　　2. unless…not… [ 让步从句]

　　eg. It is a vicious cycle and unless you consider these social, economic and environmental problems in one context, you are not serious about meeting the challenges. [注意例句中的consider sth. in one context句型:把什么事情放在一起加以综合考虑]

　　十三. 强调句

　　1. only [既是强调句,又是倒装句]

　　eg. Only in this way can you hope to improve the present situation.

　　2. It is …that…

　　eg. It is because he was too careless that he failed in the exam.

　　3. nothing but 只不过；只有…

　　eg. If what we have been striving for is nothing but pleasure-seeking, our nation will be deprived of the right to rise.(这里nothing but 可以去掉,不影响句意,但有了nothing but,就强调了后面的名词)

　　十四. 假设

　　1. Supposing……, it is likely that…. 假设…, 那么很可能… [假设, 虚拟语态]

　　eg. Supposing you wanted to buy a washing machine, it is more than likely you would obtain details regarding performance, price, etc. from an advertisement.

　　十五. 反问

　　1. What else can …? ……..还能做什么呢?

　　eg. What else can the poor parents do but obey? 这些可怜的家长除了听从外还能做什么呢?

　　2. How could ……? 怎能….

　　eg. How could I put the English books aside to read pastime books?

　十六. 比较

　　1. A is to B what X is to Y. A对于B 就象X对于Y

　　eg. Food is to man what oil is to machines.

　　2. ……more…, less…

　　eg. The closer to Christmas, the crazier they get; they become more agitated, less patient.

　　十七. 否定

　　1. 双重否定

　　not uncommon = common 平常的,普通的

　　not unusual = usual 平常的，通常的

　　not inevitable=evitable 可以避免的

　　(尽量把要强调的普通的形容词改成双重否定, 为文章多增加亮点)

　　2. by no means 并没有;当然不

　　3. no longer/more 不再

　　eg. I am no longer that ignorant girl.

　　十八. 程度

　　1. all the more 更加

　　eg. That makes London all the more fascinating, doesn’t it?

　　eg. It is all the more surprising therefore that…

　　2. more than 做副词, 意为 “多过…”, “比…以上”, “比…更”

　　eg. I am more than happy to hear from you.

　　3. more than you can… 远超过你…

　　eg. The situation is very abominable more than you can stand.环境非常恶劣,你无法忍受.

　　十九. 论相互关系

　　1. A have much(nothing) to do with B

　　2. A be closely related to B

　　3.A be directly bound up with B

　　4. a definite link between …and…

　二十一.直陈观点

　　1. more than…can 简直不,无法,难以…

　　eg. The beauty of the city is more than I can describe.

　　2. beyond description 无法描述

　　eg. The beauty of the city is beyond description.

　　3. There is no point(use) in doing… …是没有任何意义的.

　　4. The first nut for us to crack is … 我们首先要解决的问题是…

　　5. short-sighted policy 眼光短浅的政策

　　6. while ……with one hand, ……with the other. 当(我们)一方面…., 而另一方面…

　　eg. While money is eagerly collected in vast sums with one hand, it is paid out in increasingly vaster sums with the other.

　　7. far from 远离,远远不,非但不

　　eg. Far from taking exception(take exception:反对), no one is even mildly surprised.

　　8. be bound to

　　eg. Any discussion of this topic is bound to question the aims of education.

　　9. (or) vice-versa 反之亦然

　　10. sth. be measured in terms of … sth.用…来衡量

　　eg. “success” is measured in terms of freedom from insecurity.

　　11…. (现象)…, upon which views vary from person to person.

　　12.A be more essential to B. 对B来说, A是尤为关键重要的.

　　13.Distinguished scientific accomplishment is a matter of opportunity and of continuous and concentrated effort over long ye

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　　14. from the …point of view 从…角度来看

　　eg. From the health point of view 从健康的角度来看

　　15. ……must be rooted out in order to …. …必须根除以…

　　eg. Moral corruption must be rooted out in order to preserve the integrity of the state. 为了使国家健康发展,必须根除腐败.

　　16. …represent only the tip of the iceberg. …….只是冰山一角

　　eg. The most famous stars represent only the tip of the iceberg.

　　17. The rapid progress in science and technology has given a powerful shove-ahead to the productive forces of the world and the economic and social development of humanity. 科技的快速发展带给世界生产力和人类经济和社会的发展一个强劲的推动力(2001年江泽民的七.一讲话).

　　18. ….stand tall and aim far, broaden one’s vision and give full play to one’s intelligence and wisdom on the broad arena of reform, opening-up and the modernization drive. 站的高看的远,开扩自己的视野,在改革开放和现代化建设的大舞台上充分发挥个人才智(2001年江泽民的七.一讲话). (句中很多的词组都是作文中可以运用到的,比如改革开放:reform (and) opening-up等)

　　19….demonstrate the value of one’s life and work hard to achieve feats that will live up to the expectations of the people and the times. 证实自己的人生价值,努力的工作取得成就,而不辜负人民和时代的期望. (出处同上)

　　20.When asked about…, the overwhelming majority of people say that ….But other people think of … as…. / But I think quite differently. (对报刊上某一问题(已有不同的人发表了不同的观点)发表自己的观点)

　　21.It is generally believed/accepted/held that… 通常认为….

　　22 It is no denying the fact that…. 无可否认…

　　23….. , so…that…

　　eg. The river is very clear, so clear that you can see the fishes coming and going in it.

　　eg. Everything is covered with a thick layer of dust, so poisonous that all the grass, trees, vegetables and flowers gradually die.

　　二十二. 辨证分析

　　1. Just as the popular saying goes, “Every coin has two sides”. From one side,…. from the other side,…. 正如一个谚语所说的, “每个硬币都有两面(事物都是一分为二的)”.从一方面看….. 从另一方面来看….. 二

　　十三. 比喻,拟人

　　1. They are taken prisoners by fame and their achievements turn into a bar to further advance.

　　2. True and deep love of life is the spring from which flow courage, confidence and power.

　　二十四.副词

　　1. admittedly 应当承认:

　　Admittedly, a few governments have taken timid measures.

　　2. simply 简而言之:

　　The answer is simply money.

　　3. discreetly 小心谨慎地:

　　point out discreetly that…

　　4. conceivably 可以想象地:

　　Smoking may, conceivably, be harmful.

　　5. surely 肯定地:

　　This is surely the most short-sighted policy you could imagine.

　　6. eagerly 渴望地

　　7. increasingly 不断增长地

　　While money is eagerly collected in vast sums with one hand, it is paid out in increasingly vaster sums with the other.

　　8. honestly: 诚实地:

　　the government is honestly concerned about the welfare of its people政府真心实意地关心它的人民的福利

　　9. certainly: 当然地

　　As individuals we are certainly weak, but if …作为个人,我们当然是弱小的,但是如果…

　　结束语

　　这份句型总结,只是包含了大部分的句型结构.对任何人的写作都有一定的帮助.但是请不要完全依赖这份总结.(更多更好的短语,句型需要自己在阅读中不断积累总结.

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