During the class activities, I’d like to insist on my own view and try to persuade others when I have a different opinion.

　　I can remember there was a time when we discussed how to spend our vacation. While others all accepted to visit a museum, I desired to go hiking. Bravely, I stood before the class, highlighting the advantages of going sightseeing and riding bikes. Ultimately, we decided to go hiking.

　　From my perspective, only(by) knowing everyone’s opinion can we make the best decision. When you try to persuade others, you will practice your communication skills and build up your confidence. Just have a try! It’s not the consequence but the experience that really matters.

　　To conclude, insisting on your view and try(trying) to persuade others is an ideal choice to make the activity better!

　　点评：

　　本文文笔流利、观点鲜明、逻辑思维严谨，在清晰记叙班级活动的同时，点明了坚持自我的重要性。文章给人印象最深刻的就是在自然、流畅的言辞中蕴含了地道的英语词汇，彰显出作者扎实的词汇功底。例如：highlight, ultimately, build up等词汇都能运用自如，使用时结合不同的句型句式。文章也做到了句式多变，避免了一味简单句的沉闷感，使用了倒装句和强调句句型等。需要指出的是，在倒装句的使用中，文章出现错误， “only + 状语”位于句首才是引导倒装句型的正确形式。此外，文章最后一段try一词应该与前文中insisting同为动名词形式。