Living in a world full of differences, we should take a proper attitude when our opinion differs from others.

　　Days ago, I had an argument with classmates about how to decorate our school during the Children’s Day. I thought the paintings of kids would be great while others all approved of flowers. I was in a dilemma if I should change my thought. However, after I weighted the strengths of two sides, it dawned on me that I should stick to my own opinion with confidence. Therefore, I tried hard to persuade my friends to follow my decision and managed it. Finally, we made it!

　　On account of my experience, I think we should firmly believe in ourselves, having confirmed that we are right. As the old saying goes,“Being yourself is the only way to succeed.”

　　点评：

　　用一个词来概括本文的特点，即natural。纵观全文，作者并未使用复杂的长句或者堆砌华丽的辞藻来博人眼球。文章最大的亮点是词组的运用：in a dilemma, dawn on sb, stick to, with confidence, make it等等。词组的恰当运用加强了语言的生动性，使文章变得灵动。作者熟知如何避免语言的单调乏味，能运用同义词表述同一个概念，如作者分别用manage it, make it, succeed三种形式表示了“成功”。另外，在首尾两端分别运用了非谓语动词形式，形成了语法上的对应，也是语法水平与篇章结构把握能力的体现。