下面是2002年全国高考试题中的短文改错题。这道题较全面地反映了本文的口诀。现在请你试着做一做，然后参阅题后的答案与简析。

　　Last week my parents and I took a two-day trip to Emei

　　Mountain in Sichuan. As everyone knows，it’s famous 76. _____

　　Mountain with all kinds of plants and animals. The weather 77. _____

　　Was fine. It was about noon we arrived at the foot of 78. _____

　　the mountain，the three of them were very excited. As we 79. _____

　　climbed the mountain，we ed monkeys，visiting temples 80. _____

　　and told stories. On the way up I was busy taking picture 81._____

　　since the scenery was so beautiful. The time passes quickly. 82. _____

　　Evening came down. We spent the night in a hotel at the top 83. _____

　　of the mountain. The food was expensive and the service was 84. _____

　　good. I was so tired that I fell asleep at the moment my 85. _____

　　head touched the pillow.

　　答案与简析：

　　76. famous前加上a.（名词数）

　　77. 正确

　　78. we前面加when，引导一个时间状语从句。（句子成分多分析）

　　79. them→us （逻辑错误须关注）

　　80. visiting→visited（非谓动词细辨别）

　　81. picture→pictures（名词数）

　　82. passes→passed（动词形）

　　83. 去掉down（习惯用法要记住）

　　84. and→but（but，and，or和so）

　　85. 去掉at（句子成分多分析 / 习惯用法要记住）

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