这是阅卷点就5个档次所挑选出的样卷,所有的老师将根据此对其他的作文给出一定的分数,大家可以参考一下
14 points
I feel it a great honor to be your guide today. First, on behalf of my company, I warmly welcome all my distinguished guests from Australia to visit Shanghai and the Oriental Pearl TV Tower.
既然导游,客气话当然要说了，on behalf of 听力选项中出现
Located on the Huangpu River, the Oriental Pearl TV Tower is now the symbol of the city. Built in 1994 and opened to the public in 1995, it is now the highest building in Shanghai and the third highest in Asia. The Tower has a quite unique structure and consists of 3 large balls and 5 small balls. Inside the balls, you can have a bird’s eye view of the city.
Our schedule for the trip to the TV Tower is as follows: you have an hour from 9:30-10:30am to experience the history of Shanghai on the first floor. Then we’ll assemble in the middle of the hall at 10:30 and have another hour to overlook at the beautiful city sceneries in the middle ball. Finally please do remember to go to the top ball at 11:30 to enjoy your lunch.
Thanks for listening. Have a good time!
话说完了,当然要谢谢客人.这就是完整性和连贯性的体现!!
11 points
Welcome to this beautiful city-Hangzhou. I’m very honored to be your tour guide to show you the most charming scenery of the city. I’m sure you will never forget the wonderful visit I will lead you to.
Now, I’m going to give you the introduction of today’s schedule. In the morning, we will visit the Lingyin Temple. It’s one of the most famous temple in China because of its long history and good location.
After visiting the temple, we plan to have lunch at the restaurant near the West Lake. There, you will have the real traditional Chinese food and enjoy the landscape of West Lake. In the afternoon, we will go to Leifeng Tower which has an romantic Chinese love story which I will tell you during the visiting. After dinner, I will show you the most well-known scenery-West Lake. You can boating in the lake and enjoy the beautiful views.
这是阅卷点就5个档次所挑选出的样卷,所有的老师将根据此对其他的作文给出一定的分数,大家可以参考一下
14 points
I feel it a great honor to be your guide today. First, on behalf of my company, I warmly welcome all my distinguished guests from Australia to visit Shanghai and the Oriental Pearl TV Tower.
既然导游,客气话当然要说了，on behalf of 听力选项中出现
Located on the Huangpu River, the Oriental Pearl TV Tower is now the symbol of the city. Built in 1994 and opened to the public in 1995, it is now the highest building in Shanghai and the third highest in Asia. The Tower has a quite unique structure and consists of 3 large balls and 5 small balls. Inside the balls, you can have a bird’s eye vie
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w of the city.
Our schedule for the trip to the TV Tower is as follows: you have an hour from 9:30-10:30am to experience the history of Shanghai on the first floor. Then we’ll assemble in the middle of the hall at 10:30 and have another hour to overlook at the beautiful city sceneries in the middle ball. Finally please do remember to go to the top ball at 11:30 to enjoy your lunch.
Thanks for listening. Have a good time!
话说完了,当然要谢谢客人.这就是完整性和连贯性的体现!!
11 points
Welcome to this beautiful city-Hangzhou. I’m very honored to be your tour guide to show you the most charming scenery of the city. I’m sure you will never forget the wonderful visit I will lead you to.
Now, I’m going to give you the introduction of today’s schedule. In the morning, we will visit the Lingyin Temple. It’s one of the most famous temple in China because of its long history and good location.
After visiting the temple, we plan to have lunch at the restaurant near the West Lake. There, you will have the real traditional Chinese food and enjoy the landscape of West Lake. In the afternoon, we will go to Leifeng Tower which has an romantic Chinese love story which I will tell you during the visiting. After dinner, I will show you the most well-known scenery-West Lake. You can boating in the lake and enjoy the beautiful views.
What do you think of the plan? If you have some advise, please tell me. I will arrange it and give you a most comfortable trip.
8 points
Welcome everyone come to visit Shanghai. I’m the tour guide. I’m glad to introduce you the city where I grow I up.
Now the following is the schedule for the day where we will go. At first, we’ll go to the Shanghai Museum at 9 am. I believe you’ll like there. You can learn some history of China as your are interest in our country. Secondly, at noon, we’ll go to the Yu Garden and have a rest. You can not only buy something that you like but also have something to eat. The food is so delicious that I’m sure that everyone will like. At 2 pm we’ll go to the next site which is also the last one today. The last place is Pudong. You’ll find the development of Shanghai is fast. And at about 4pm, it will be end and we’ll go back to the hotel.
I hope everyone will have a good time today. If you meet with troubles, you can turn to me for help at any time.
5 points
Hello! Everybody. Welcome to here! Today I’m your guide. I believe we will have a good trip.
We will go to the An Ji. An Ji is very beautiful city in Zhe Jiang. I think y
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ou will be intrest in it. The day’s plan is so much. First, we will go to the ZhuZhongYuan at 8:00am. There have so much and very of Zhuzi. At 11:30 am, We will eating lunch.
And at the afternoon, We will go to the CangLongBaiPu. At 1:00 pm In the mountain, a river still around it. The river so clear and cold. We can see some small fish in the river. Walk alone the stone road. We will be seeing the view beside of the stone road. I believe that You will very like it. At 5:30 pm We will take the bus and back to hotel. Later, You can eating the dinner in the hotel. This is the plan of today. Now, Are you have some questions? If have then asked me, And I will give you a perfect answer!
So I hope and believe that We will have a good trip.
2 points
I’m very glad to your come to Shanghai. Welcome. we are visit Jin Mao Building today.
Jin Mao Building stand Lujazui Finanent Trade, in Pu Dong. The shopping and eating all above in Lujazui Finanent Trade. Zheng Da Guang Chang. Do Fang Ming Zhu etc.
Jin Mao Building is 800 miller-higher. Jin Mao Kai Yue Hotel in it. It’s the highest for Building in Shanghai. At 88 stairs, We can look all of Shanghai, Jin Mao Building is steel above all, glass above with. It’s very clear in the Sunny.
Some business office in here, so it’s the famous Finanent Trade in Shanghai.
We are visiting Jin Mao Building can introduce people’s living in Shanghai.
I’m wish you visit happy today.
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