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英语补弱之勇闯书面表达篇
英语书面表达是英语知识的综合运用；是基础知识升华。高考书面表达占30分，是分量较重的部分。因此掌握句式结构，准确翻译句子是基础。
（一）补习句式结构
下面以作文中经常出现的经典句式为例，对基本句型的运用作些说明，以提高书面表达能力。
【句型1】主语 + 不及物动词（S+V）
【例句】
（1）I hesitated for a moment.
（2）The next day, we set off early in the morning.
练一练：
（1）为了赶上别人，你最好努力学习。To catch up with others, you’d better work harder.
（2）事故是怎样发生的呢？How did the accident occur/happen?
（3）在刚刚过去的30年里，我们的生活发生了很大的变化。Our life has changed a lot in the past thirty years.
（4）她正沿着湖边走。She is walking along the lake.
【句型2】主语 + 系动词 + 表语（S+V+P）
常见的系动词有：be, seem, appear, become, go, get, grow, turn, look, sound, feel, taste, smell
【例句】
(１). As the saying goes, eyes are the window of our hearts.
众所周知的是，眼睛是心灵的窗户。
好处：谚语的使用增光添彩。
(2). Everyone is born equal.
每个人生来平等。
好处：意思表达准确。
练一练：
（1）那人看起来很善良。That man seems kind.
（2）我们以我们的朋友而自豪。We are proud of our friends.
【句型3】主语 + 及物动词 + 宾语
【例句】
(1). If your eyes are aching, doing some eye exercises can relieve your eye tiredness.
如果你的眼睛感到疼痛，做眼操可以缓解你的视力疲劳。
好处：动名词作主语引导从句。
(2).I believe after I fulfill these plans,1 will be able to lead a happy life in college.
我认为在我完成这些计划的时候，我将可以过上新的生活。
好处：lead a happy life，过上快乐的生活。
(3).I look forward to hearing from you.
我期待能收到你的消息。
好处：这个句子常用在信件的结尾，look forward to后面加分词或者名词。
(4). The striking differences between the two show rapid changes in people's life in
这两人着装上的巨大的差距，昭示了我国人民生活水平的巨大变化。
好处：striking修饰主语，表示强烈的语气。
练一练：
（1） 我们欣赏着温暖的阳光和美丽的景色。we enjoyed the warm sunshine and a beautiful view.
（2）年轻人喜欢听流行音乐。Young people enjoy listening to pop music.
【句型4】主语 + 及物动词 + 宾语 + 宾补
【例句】
（1）She wanted you to call her back as soon as you are home.
（2）Relying too much on mouse clicking makes us lazier and less creative both mentally and physically.
练一练：
（1）不幸的是，他们发现还钱有点难。Unfortunately they find it difficult to repay this money.
（2）我们正在使我们的国家变得越来越漂亮。We are making our country more and more beautiful.
be （must be/lives）
stands/exists/lies
There seems/happens to be +主语 +状语
occurs/appears
【例句】
(1).Seeing her children flying happily in the sky, she feels very delighted.
看到孩子们在空中自由地翱翔，她感到很愉悦。
好处：现在分词作状语表示伴随状态。
(2). With the help of glasses, they can see the blackboard clearly.
在眼镜的辅助之下，他们才能将黑板看得更清楚。
好处：with引导状语表示伴随。
练一练：
（1）上个月以来这座博物馆前面常有小汽车被盗。There have often been stolen cars in front of the museum since last month.
（2） 机器肯定是出故障了，因为它运转不正常。There must be something wrong with the machine, for it doesn’t run well.
（3） 过去有一条小河环绕这个小村庄流过。There used to be a river around the small village.
【句型6】并列句：
【例句】
（1） A convenient tool can certainly make our work easier, but it doesn’t always help in a positive way.
（2） we can take part in some activities together and I can introduce you to others.
练一练：
（1）他脾气很好 , 可是我还是不喜欢他。He is good-natured; still I don’t like him.
（2）她看上去很年轻 , 可是她已三十多岁了。 She looks very young, but she is already in her 30’s.
【句型7】状语从句
【例句】
(1). The hotel is located 500 meters far from the entrance of Baishan Moun-
tain,a very convenient position to go sight-seeing in the
宾馆在距离白山入口处500米的地方，这对于参观白山来说是一个很方便的位置。
好处：伴随状语的使用很到位。
(2). But since you are young, the disease won't be very serious and you can beat it．
但是因为你还比较年轻，疾病不会很严重，你能够战胜它。
好处：since，引导原因状语从句。
(3). As long as we hold this sense, we can surely achieve a sustainable devel-
opment。
只要我们有这个意识，我们就一定能实现可持续发展。
好处：as long as，只要；可持续发展的表达很准确。
(4). First, I will set my goal after entering college and improve the way of study so that I can properly make use of my time.
首先，我需要确定我在进入大学后的目标，改进学习方法，从而能够充
分地利用时间。
好处：复杂句的组织十分恰当而合理。
(5). Second,I must learn to live independently since l will leave home.
其次，我必须学会如何独立地生存，毕竟我会离开家里。
好处：since引导原因状语从句。
(6).A fashionable woman is sitting there with a laptop, while an older man who is wearing an old style of clothes is standing near her.
一个穿着时尚的女孩子坐在那里摆弄电脑，而一个穿着古老服饰的老
人站在一旁。
好处：while和who的作用。
(7). Not only our history, but also our culture is the access to understand us better.
不仅我们的历史，还有我们的文化都是让你更好了解我们的入口。
好处：连词的使用；词组the access to do
(8). Since the world has been connected as a whole, it's convenient for one to communicate with another no matter how far away the person is, life has taken up a quick rhythm and many people are taking advantage of the high technology, leading a more peaceful and enjoyable life.
自从世界之间相互联系之后，无论人们之间的距离多遥远，相互之间的交流还是很方便的，生活的节奏变得更快，人们利用高科技使得生活更加平静而又愉快。
好处：句子的组织很不错，无论是since引导原因状语从句，还是不定式做主语后置，包括词组的运用，如take advantage of。
练一练：
（1）我们到达电影院的时候,电影已经开演了. The film had begun when we got to the cinema.
（2）I won’t believe what he says. （使用状语从句）
→No matter what he says, I won’t believe.
【句型8】名词性从句
【例句】
(1). So my viewpoint is that we are taught not only in English but using Chinese as a minor way to explain things that are hard to understand.
因此，我的观点是，用英文教授，同时对于一些难以理解的内容用中文进行辅助讲解。
好处：表语从句使用正确。
(2). I've learned it from the Internet that you want to make a Chinese friend so as to learn the Chinese language and culture.
我从互联网上得知，你想寻找一个中国朋友以便学习中国的语言和文化。
好处：组织句子的方式。
(3). However, other hold the opposite idea that the book is far more interesting and entertaining than a film.
然而，其他人持相反的观点，即书本比起电影更有趣，更有娱乐性。
好处：由that引导同位语从句。
练一练：
（1）To his surprise, the little girl knows so many things.（使用名词性从句）
→What surprises him is that the little girl knows so many things.
(That the littler girl knows so many things surprises him.／It surprises him that the littler girl knows so many things .)
（2）我想强调的是我们都应该多听听别人。What I want to stress is that each of us should listen more to others.
【句型9】定语从句
【例句】
(1). I'm sorry to hear that you got the lung cancer which brings you great pain．
我很遗憾地得知你身患肺癌，给你带来了巨大的痛苦。
好处：which引导限制性定语从句。
(2). Some students who wish to be taught in English will be disappointed.
那些希望英语授课的学生们可能会失望了。
好处：定语从句和wish to do的使用。
(3). It is really a good idea to exchange our two cultures through the magazine, which is of great help to our students and our friendship.
通过杂志我们可以交流文化，这对于我们的学生和友谊都很有益处。
好处：非限制性定语从句。
(4). The magazine can be a friendship bridge between our two schools which promotes our understanding of each other.
这份杂志在我们两个学校间建立起了友谊之桥，促进我们更好地了解彼此。
好处：bridge的使用很生动，同时which引导了定语从句。
(5). The vivid difference represents the development that has taken place in the past a hundred years.
这种鲜明的差异代表了人类在近一百年来取得的进步。
好处：定语从句和现在完成时。
(6).Third, the EXIT signs could not be seen clearly, which presented potential safety hazards.
第三，出口的标示不是很清晰，这就有可能带来安全的隐患。
好处：which引导的非限制性定语从句。
(7). This survey has shown that a good many students are suffering from bad habits, which may cause potential health problems to them.
这个调查表明很多学生都有着不好的饮食习惯，而这有可能对他们造成潜在的健康威胁。
好处：非限制性定语从句；suffer from遭受。
练一练：
⑴我有一个喜欢古典音乐的朋友。
I have a friend who likes classical music.
（2）史密斯到美国去了，他曾教我们英语。
Mr. Smith, who once taught us English, has gone to
（3）房子旁边有棵树，那是我爷爷栽的。
There is a tall tree beside the house, which was planted by my grandpa.
（4）他住在一所大房子里，房前有一棵树。
He lives in a big house, in front of which stands a tree.
（5）我们见到了那个由他照看的女孩。
We saw the girl whom/that he took care of/looked after.
【句型10】非谓语结构
【例句】
(1). Based on the above, I am qualified to be a good interpreter in every sports meet during the time.
基于以上（的讨论），在运动会期间我会成为一个合格的解说员。
好处：短语和关键词的使用，比如base on和be qualified。
(2). There are many books available in our library, dealing with almost every subject.
在我们的图书馆里，我们可以看到很多的书，几乎涉及了每一个领域。
好处：定语后置，分词做状语，表示状态。
(3). Surrounded by rows of trees, our library stands out from all the other buildings.
被成行的树木所包围着，我们的图书馆矗立在其他教学楼之间。
好处：过去分词做状语。
(4). The film was very good, but I found some problems existing during the film.
电影很精彩，但是我发现存在一些问题。
好处：exit作为定语来修饰名词，所以需要用分词形式。
(5). Some of us think that it is better to see the film than to read the book in the original.
我们中有的人认为比起读原著，看电影是更好的方式。
好处：比较级的成分是两个不定式。
(6). From the cartoon, we can figure out the little boy on street, holding a book entitled Civic Virtue, appeals passers-by not to throw away rubbish and not to spit in public places, who are practically indifferent to their behaviors in public places.
从这个漫画中我们可以看到一个小孩在站在路上，手拿一本标题为公共道德的书，呼吁路人不要乱扔垃圾，不要随地吐痰——路人一向漠视这些行为。
好处：figure out指出；用分词做状语表示当时的状态。
练一练：
（1）She walked out of the lab and many students followed her. (用过去分词)
→Followed by many students, she walked out of the lab.
（2）They sang and laughed as they went back to school.( 使用V-ing形式)
→Singing and laughing, they went back to school.
（3）When he arrives, please give me an e-mail.（使用V-ing形式）
→On his arriving/ arrival, please give me an e-mail.
（4）Sitting on the train（坐在火车上）, I thought my dad would be very happy when he saw the present.
（5）Time permitting(时间允许的话), we’ll visit the Great Wall.
【句型11】倒装句
【例句】
(1).I think only when we help each other can we enjoy a happy life,
我认为只有我们互相帮助的时候我们才能感受到生活的快乐．
好处：倒装句的使用很正确。
(2). On the walls of my room are many nice photographs I took last weekend.
在我屋子里面的墙壁上，有我上周照的一些不错的照片。
好处：状语前置；省略了that的定语从句。
(3). Only in this way can we have enough energy to study better.
只有这样，我们才有足够的精力更好地学习。
好处：倒装句的正确使用。
练一练：
（1）仅仅是近几年来，妇女才开始在这个领域赶上男子。
Only in recent years have women begun to catch up with men in this area.
（2）He had no sooner come back from Beijing than he was sent abroad. (使用倒装句改写)
→No sooner had he come back from Beijing than he was sent abroad.
（3）Though I’m weak, I’ll make the effort. (使用倒装句改写)
→Weak as I am, I’ll make the effort.
（4）He did not know what had happened until he had read the news in the newspaper.( 使用倒装句改写)
→Not until he had read the news in the newspaper did he know what had happened.
【句型12】强调句
It is(was)+被强调部分+that(who)…。
【例句】
(1). It is the Ministry of Education that promotes this program.
是教育部推动了这个计划。
好处：强调句的使用十分准确。
(2). It is this magazine that helps our students know more about the US.
正是这份杂志帮助我们更好地了解了美国。
好处：强调句型使用很准确。
(3). It is a clean campus that provides favorable study environment which is good for us all.
正是干净的校园给我们提供了很好的学习环境，这对我们每个人都是有益的。
好处：强调句和定语从句的使用十分准确。
练一练：
（1）He did not know what had happened until he had read the news in the newspaper.(使用强调句型.It was…)
→It was not until he had read the news in the newspaper that he knew what had happened.
（2）我不知道是否因为我这么长时间没能够到户外去，以致我对大自然中的一切变得这么狂热。
I wonder if it’s because I haven’t been able to be outdoors for so long that I’ve grown so crazy about everything to do with nature.
【句型13】祈使句
【例句】
Show your respect and never stop others till they finish their talk; show you are interested by a supportive silence or a knowing smile; be open-minded to different opinions even though you don’t like them.
练一练：
（1）好好干，你就会成功的。Work hard, and you will succeed.
（2）快点，要不就迟到了。Hurry up, or you’ll be late.
（二）经典作文背诵、模仿
1.经典议论文（三段成文）
1.B[2009·江西卷]
学校即将举行以“Turning a bad mood（心情）into a good one ”为题目的英语作文比赛，请按下列要求定一篇100词左右的记叙文或议论文。
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1. 发生的具体事件。 2. 对你的心情有何影响？ 3. 你如何应对？ |
记叙文 议论文
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【参考范文】议论文
Turning a Bad Mood into A Good One
It is very important for us to have a good mood in our daily life. If you have a good mood, you will be happy with everything in the world. Most importantly, you will have a optimistic effect on the people around you. We all will live a harmonious and happy life. It is also good for your health.
However，sometimes when you meet some difficulties, when you quarrel with others or when you fail in doing something. You may have a bad mood. If so, you should get rid of it as soon as possible. As we all know, every thing has its two sides. So you should think more about its bright side. We are sure that everything will be better with time passing by. Remember: Only you can make yourself happy.
I hope that everyone has a good mood every day!
【思路分析】
本文是一篇开放式的作文，只提出了一个话题“Turning a bad mood into a good one”, 并给出了体裁上的选择和内容上的简要提示。话题非常切合学生实际生活，让每个学生都有话可写。此题留给学生了一定的想象空间，有利于优生的发挥。文章的人称以一、二人称为主；时态为一般现在时；内容要点： 1. 好心情的重要性。2. 产生坏心情的原因。3. 应该如何调整心情。
2.（2006·陕西卷）书面表达（满分30分）
暑假即将来临。你班同学讨论了假期计划，提出了不同看法，请根据提示写一篇有关讨论的英语短文，并谈谈你的看法。
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优 点 |
缺 点 |
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呆在家中 |
花费少、舒适方便 |
不能亲身了解外界 |
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外出旅游 |
增长知识、开阔眼界 |
花费多、旅途不便 |
注意：1.短文写在答题卡上的指定区域，词数80-120（不含已写好部分）。
2.短文必须包括表中所列要点，可根据内容分段表述。
3.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
4.参考词汇：跟界―horizon(或view)
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The summer holiday is coming. Our class have had a discussion about what to do during the holiday. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【参考范文】
The summer holiday is coming. Our class has had a discussion about what to do during the holiday. Some are in favor of staying at home. They think it’s both convenient and comfortable. What’s more, they can save money for other purposes. But they will lose the chance of getting to know the outside world.
However, others prefer to go out for traveling since it can increase their knowledge and broaden their horizons. But they will spend more money and meet some difficulties while traveling.
In my opinion, it would be much better to stay at home for I can do what I like, such as reading books, watching TV, and helping my parents with the housework.
【思路分析】
本文是一篇议论文。因是介绍讨论的情况，故用they较好。时态以一般现在时为主，可适当用一些将来时。结构上，采用三段式成文，1.呆在家里虽然花费少、舒适，但不能了解外面的世界；2.外出旅游虽可增长知识、开阔眼界，但花费多，旅途中的困难等。3.发表自己的看法或观点（总结段）。
3.（2007·山东卷）写作（满分 30 分）
阅读下面的文字，用英语写一篇 120—150 词的短文。
今年，教育部直属师范大学将招收一批免费师范生，学生毕业后须回生源所在省份的中小学
任教十年以上，你愿意成为一名免费师范生吗？请陈述理由。
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【参考范文】
I’m willing to become a normal university student for free and I’d like to come back to my hometown to teach at primary or middle school for ten years after graduation.
For one thing, in return for the help from society, I want to serve my hometown heart and soul. For another, it is an ideal for me to become a teacher and help children to become useful people in the future. Besides, I also want to save some money for my family and lighten my parents’ load.
In a word, I really want to become a student in such a school.
【思路分析】
本文是一篇议论类文章，陈述自己愿意或不愿意成为师范生的理由。写作时应把握以下三点：1.阐明自己的观点；2.讲明自己愿意（或不愿意）成为师范生的原因；3.总结陈述。
【较高级的词汇和短语】be willing to…; in return for…; for one thing… for another…; besides; in a word; serve…heart and soul.
2.经典书信类
1.B[2009·全国卷II]
假定你是李华，你的美国朋友sarah 打算暑期来北京旅游，来信询问改建后前门大街的情况。请你写封回信，简单介绍以下内容：
2. 位置：天安门广场南面；
3. 交通：公共汽车17、69、59等路，地铁2号线；
4. 特色：步行街、当当车、茶馆、剧院等。
参考词汇：步行街 pedestrian street
当当车 trolley car
地铁 subway
注意：
1. 词数100左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
Dear sarah.
Thank you for you letter asking about the rebuilt Qianmen street. Here is something about it.
【参考范文】
Dear Sarah,
Thank you for you letter asking about the rebuilt Qianmen street. Here is something about it.
Qianmen Street is a famous street of over 600 years old. Along this 800-meter street, there are more than 300 shops. As the street is in the center of Beijing, just to the south of Tian’anmen Square, it’s very convenient to get there by bus.You may take Buses No. 17, 69 or 59. Subway Line 2 has a stop there too. Qianmen Street is a pedestrian street, but there are trolley cars to take you not only to the shops, but also to theaters and teahouses where you can experience a truly Chinses way of life. I’m sure you’ll like it.
Yours,
Li Hua
【思路分析】
1.人称定位第二人称；时态：一般现在时。
2.内容要点：（1）前门大街的概况；（2）前门大街的位置；（3）所乘的交通路线；（4）前门大街的特点；（5）自然流畅的结尾。
3.本文的汉语提示朴实、简单。切忌盲目追求复杂句式，以至矫揉造作，句型选择要自然合理，顺理成章。
4.学会书信的开头和结尾的语言。比如：Please consider my request, and I’m looking forward to your reply/hearing from you. I’m very glad to hear from you. I’m sure you’ll like it.等。
2.（2008·全国卷II）书面表达(满分30分)
假定你是李华, 你的英国朋友Peter来信向你咨询如何才能学好中文. 请你根据下列要点写回信.
要点: 1. 参加中文学习班;
2. 看中文书刊、电视；
3. 学唱中文歌曲；
4. 交中国朋友。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3.开头语已为你写好。
June8, 2008
Dear Peter,
I’m glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to learn Chinese well.
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Best wishes,
Li Hua
【参考范文】
June 8,2008
Dear Peter,
I’m glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to learn Chinese well.
Here are a few suggestions. First, it is important to take a Chinese course, as you’ll be able to learn from the teacher and practice with your fellow students. Then, it also helps to watch TV and read books, newspapers and magazines in Chinese whenever possible. Besides, it should be a good idea to learn and sing Chinese songs, because by doing so you’ll learn and remember Chinese words more easily. You can also make more Chinese friends. They will tell you a lot about China and help you learn Chinese.
Try and write me in Chinese next time.
Best wishes
【思路分析】
1.人称要以第二人称为主，时态选用一般现在时和将来时。
2.内容要点：(1)take a Chinese course; (2)read books, newspapers and magazines in Chinese; watch TV programmes; (3)learn to sing Chinese songs; (4)make Chinese friends.
3.注意句子的长短搭配；句子结构要清晰；时态、人称、数、语态要一致；上下文的逻辑关联要顺畅。
3.（2006·全国卷II）书面表达(满分30分)
假定你是李华，亚洲冬季运动会将在你居住的地方举办，现正在招募志愿者，你希望成为其中一员。请按要求用英文给组委会写一封申请信。内容包括：
1.个人情况：年龄、性别、学历
2.个人条件：英语好、爱好体育、善于交往、乐于助人、熟悉本地情况
3.承诺：提供最佳服务
注意：
1.词数100左右，开头语已为你写好
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯
3.生词：申请—apply(v.), application (n.) 志愿者—volunteer
Dear Sir/Madam,
My name is Li Hua. I would like to work as a volunteer for the Winter Asian Games.
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Yours faithfully,
Li Hua
【参考范文】
Dear Sir/Madam,
My name is Li Hua. I would like to work as a volunteer for the Winter Asian Games.
I am a boy/girl of 17 and I am studying at high school now. I am good at English and I can talk with foreign tourists in English freely.
I believe I can do a good job for the Games. First, I like sports and I know the place very well. Second, I get along with others easily, which is especially useful for a volunteer. Third, I’m ready to give help whenever it is needed. My promise is to offer the best service possible to the people at the Games.
Please consider my request, and I’m looking forward to your early reply.
Yours faithfully,
Li Hua
【思路分析】
1.人称定位第一人称；时态：一般现在时。
2.内容要点：（1）年龄、性别；（2）学历、英语水平；（3）爱好体育、熟悉本地情况；（4）善于交往、乐于助人；（5）提供最佳服务；（6）自然流畅的结尾。
3.本文的汉语提示朴实、简单。切忌盲目追求复杂句式，以至矫揉造作，句型选择要自然合理，顺理成章。
4.学会书信的开头和结尾的语言。比如：Please consider my request, and I’m looking forward to your reply/hearing from you. I’m very glad to hear from you.等。
3.经典看图写话类
1.A[2009·北京卷]
假设你是红星中学高三一班学生李华，为响应绿化祖国的号召，你班四月十二日去郊区植树，请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序，介绍植树活动的全过程，给某英文杂志的“绿色行动”专栏写一篇以“Green Action in Our Class”为题的英文稿件。
注意： 词数不少于60。
提示词：郊区 suburbs
【参考范文】
One possible version:
Green Action in Our Class
April 12 is memorable because our class had a meaningful experience on that day. In the morning, we bicycld to the suburbs to plants trees, talking and laughing all the way. Upon arrival, we began to work immediately. Some were digging holes. Some were carrying and planting young trees. Others were watering them. After getting the work donw, we put up a board reminding people to protect the trees. Before leaving we took some photos to record our green action. Seeing the lines of trees, we all had a sense of achievement. We feel it’s our duty to protect and beautify our environment.
【思路分析】
本文为一篇记叙文，其主要考查学生综合运用语言的能力。本题相对比较容易，因为题目中提供了比较具体的情景，而且是学生常见的语言情景。但要注意表达要点要全面，写本文的要点基本包括以下几点：1、清晨，同学们骑车准备去植树；2、植树时，学生们所做的不同工作；三、植树后，安插“爱护树木的提示牌”；4、全部活动结束后，合影留念。同时，考生应以此为故事梗概，按照时间顺序对文章进行展开。
考生在写作的时候，要尽量避免逐条翻译以及过于平铺直叙。在每一幅图画描述的过程中，可以在紧扣文章的基础上，增加适当的发挥和议论。图画作文若想得到高分，一定要让阅卷人看到文章的时候。有一种身临其境，饶有兴趣的感觉。
还要注意表达内容要点时要使用丰富多样的表达方式。包括词汇多样、句法多样，段落结构多样。以上是本题获得高分数的关键。
2.（2008·北京卷）书面表达
情景作文 （30分）
假设你是红星中学高三一班的学生李华，为校刊英语园地写一篇题为“Our Spring Outing” 的英文稿件。 请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序，叙述上周你们班从准备春游到春游结束的完整过程。
注意： 词数不少于60.
提示词： 游乐园 amusement park
垃圾箱 bin
(请务必将情景作文写在答题卡II第一页指定区域内)
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【参考范文】
Last Thursday, we had a class meeting to discuss where to go for our spring outing. We came up with several choices such as going boating, climbing a mountain, and going to an amusement park. Finally, we decided to go mountain climbing.
The next day, we set off early in the morning. While climbing the mountain, we enjoyed the warm sunshine and a beautiful view. However, when reached the top, we were shocked to see litter here and there, such as bottles and banana peels. Then we started to pick up the litter. Afterwards, we put the rubbish into the nearby recycling bin and non-recycling bin respectively.
We were tired but happy.
【思路分析】
本文为一篇记叙文，其主要考查学生综合运用语言的能力。本题相对比较容易，因为题目中提供了比较具体的情景，而且是学生常见的语言情景。但要注意表达要点要全面，写本文的要点基本包括以下几点：1. 讨论2. 爬山3. 捡拾别人（或收拾自己）的垃圾4. 投放垃圾
还要注意表达内容要点时要使用丰富多样的表达方式。包括词汇多样、句法多样，段落结构多样。也要注意描述事实和议论的结合，不能只描述事实而忽视议论。以上是本题获得高分数的关键。
2.（2008·天津卷）书面表达（满分30分）
假设2008年2月12日是你父亲的生日，下面三幅图描绘的是你给父亲买完礼物后乘坐地铁回家时经历的一件事。请根据图示，用英语写一篇日记记叙这件事，并谈谈自己的感受。
注意：
1. 词数不少于100；
2. 可适当加入细节，以使行文连贯。
参考词汇：
地铁（列车）----- subway train
February 12th, 2008
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【参考范文】
February 12th, 2008
The day is my Dad’s birthday. This afternoon I went to the shopping center downtown, and bought a present for him. Then I took the subway train home. Sitting on the train, I thought my dad would be very happy when he saw the present. At the next station, an old lady with two heavy bags got on the train and stood in front of me. She looked tired. I hesitated for a moment, and then offered my seat to her. The old lady thanked me a lot and sat down. Seeing her smile, I felt happy. I will always be ready to help others in the future.
【思路分析】
本文是一篇记叙文。写作要点：1. 本文的命题形式为汉语提示+三副图画，记叙+议论，体裁为日记。
时态以一般过去式为主。2．叙述事情发生的时间、地点3. 为爸爸买生日礼物4．买完生日礼物后坐
地铁回家5．见老奶奶提着重物，找不到座位6．为老奶奶让座7．看到老奶奶笑容，倍受鼓舞，决心
以后更多的帮助别人
3.（2008·四川卷）书面表达（满分30分）
你校学生会准备办一期英语墙报，主题为：保护环境从我做起。请你根据下图所示写一篇英语短文。
注意：
1. 词数100左右，开头语已为你写好；
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
What can I do for our environment?
Everyone can do something for our environment.
【参考范文】
What can I do for our environment?
Everyone can do something for our environment. For me, I should try to save electricity in my daily life. For example, if I am the last person leave the classroom in the evening, I will always remember to turn off the lights. In order to protect our forests, I will use paper wisely. I should try to use both sides of paper whenever it is possible. I will not use things like paper cups and disposable chopsticks because they are made of wood. I believe that doing all these small things will improve our environment and help make our world a better place to live in.
【思路分析】
本文是议论文，用第一人称、时态以一般现在时为主。内容要点：（1）第一图说明我们应节约用电。（2）尽量不用木质的用品以保护森林。（3）引出结论，保护环境让世界成为一个美好家园。
4.经典说明文类
1.B[2009·四川卷]
假设你是李华。你的外国笔友Jane 打算于七月来中国，特来信了解中国的社交习俗。
1.词数100左右，信的开头和结束语已为你写好（不计入总词数）。
Dear Jane, 全品高考网
Glad to hear from you and you’re welcome to China July.
I hope what’s mentioned above might be helpful and wish you a good journey.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【参考范文】
One Possible Version
Dear Jane,
Glad to hear from you and you’re welcome to Chins in July, The following are some Chinese customs.
Firstly, we greet each other by saying “Hello” or asking such questions as “Where are you going?” or “Are you busy?” to express our care, Secondly, when praised, we reply with “oh, no!” or “I’m over-praised” to show good manners. Next, when receiving a gift, we usually say “It’s unnecessary” besides “Thanks” to show politeness and then put it away. Finally, at dinner parties, we talk loudly and touch glasses when drinking to someone’s health or success to show that we’re warm.
Anyhow, different cultures, different customs. If you “Do as the Romans do when in Rome”, you’ll enjoy more of your stay here. 全品高考网
I hope what’s mentioned above might be belpful and wish you a good jouney.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【思路分析】
本文以书信的形式向外国笔友Jane介绍中国的社交习俗。作为中国人自然非常熟悉自己的风俗习惯，因此此话题贴近学生生活，不偏不怪，有话可写。但写作提示较简单，需要发挥自己的想象能力把内容有序的表达完整。文章的人称应以第一、二人称为主；时态用一般现在时；文章要点：1.见面时的问候方式；2.对赞美的回答方或；3.接收礼物时的回应方式； 4.餐宴礼节；5.适当总结发挥。
因本文为一篇说明文，所以要注意叙述的条理性。要恰当使用一些连词，比如：firstly， first，secondly，finally等。
2.B[2009·江苏卷]
鼠标是计算机时代最佳的人机交互工具之一。它极大地方便了人们的计算机操作。但是，过分依赖鼠标的习惯也会带来一些不利影响。请你以鼠标为切入点，根据下表所提示的信息，用英语写一篇短文。
|
鼠标的必要性 |
对多数人来说，操作计算机，上网冲浪…… | |
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鼠标的便捷性 |
点击、移动、插入、拷贝、删除…… |
编辑文本，搜索信息…… |
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收发邮件，选购商品…… | ||
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点播音乐，下载电影…… | ||
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如果过分依赖鼠标…… (请考生结合自身感受，列举两到三点) | ||
注意：
1．对所给要点逐一陈述，适当发挥，不要简单翻译。
2．词数150左右。开头已经写好，不计人总词数。
3．作文中不得提及考生所在学校和本人姓名。
The mouse is a most effective device used by people to communicate with a computer．
【参考范文】
The mouse is a most effective device used by people to communicate with a computer．
For most people, it’s almost impossible to operate a computer without a mouse, let alone surf the Internet. A well-chosen mouse is really handy, flexible and convenient in controlling the screen. With the functions of inserting, deleting, moving and copying, it enables us to edit test, browse web page and download what we want. It can even bring us a flood of music, movies and PC games. Just imagine, all this can be done with a cute mouse.
A convenient tool can certainly make our work easier, but it doesn’t always help in a positive way. Too much ready information on our fingertips leaves little room for knowledge pursuing. Too many ready answers make us less excited in finding truth. Relying too much on mouse clicking makes us lazier and less creative both mentally and physically.(153 words)
【思路分析】
1.本文要求写一篇短文介绍鼠标的必要性和便捷性并说明过分依赖鼠标的弊端。所以人称以第三人称it为主。
2.文章的时态应用一般现在时。
3.内容要点：（1）鼠标的必要性。鼠标是操作计算机、上网冲浪必不可缺少的工具；（2）鼠标的便捷性。编辑文本，搜索信息；收发邮件，选购商品；点播音乐，下载电影；（3）如果过分依赖鼠标的弊端。
4.重点短语：it’s almost impossible to do，let alone，both…and…等。
3.（2007·全国卷II）书面表达（满分30分）
一家宾馆新开业，为吸引外国宾客，希望在互联网上进行宣传，请你用英语为其写一篇文字介绍。主要内容就包括：
１． 地点：距白山入口处500米；
２． 房间及价格：单人间（共20间）；
100元／天；双人间（共15间）；
150元／天；热水淋浴；
３． 餐饮：餐厅（中、西餐），咖啡厅（茶、咖啡）；
４． 游泳池：全天免费开放；
５． 欢迎预定。
注意：
1． 词数100左右，开头语已为你写好；
2． 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯
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Welcome to Baishan Mountain Hotel
Baishan Mountain Hotel is now open for business. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【参考范文】
Welcome to Baishan Mountain Hotel
Baishan Mountain Hotel is now open for business.
Our hotel stands 500 meters away from the entrance to Baishan Mountain. It has 20 single rooms and 15 double rooms, all with hot showers. A single room is 100 yuan and a double room 150 yuan for one night. You are advised to book in advance. The hotel serves three meals a day and there are Chinese food and western food for you to choose from. You can also enjoy yourself at the café drinking tea or coffee in the evening. We also have a swimming pool, which is open all day and free of charge.
All are welcome!
【思路分析】
本文为一篇实用性很强的介绍说明类的应用文，此题考查学生在具体工作生活中英语实际运用能力。题目要点明确，难度不大。介绍类文章语言要简单明确，朴实易懂，让最大多数人看明白。本文的参考范文也充分体现了这一点。内容要点：1.地点；2.房间及价格；3.餐饮；4.游泳池；5.欢迎预定；6.适当结尾。
